Hi Averey! Peter was having trouble leaving comments (I think it's something in his browser since it happened with both blogs he tried), so I'm pasting both of his comments for you here — and don't forget to add the label "Comment Wall" to this post; that way people will be able to find it in your label navigation box.
Introduction: Hey Averey! I'm Peter Guzman, and I'm in your blog group this week. I'm so very glad to read that your family is one of the most important things in your life. As I'm sure you already know, being an aunt/uncle is seriously one of the best roles someone can be, because you get to have all the fun and none of the hard stuff like changing diapers and waking up early! I'm extremely jealous that you visited so many places, especially Rome and Spain! Traveling abroad is one thing that I really hope I get to do while in school, but I'm running out of time! Anyways, I'm looking forward to reading your other posts and hearing from you on my blog! --Peter
Storytelling: Hi Averey! I must say, I definitely enjoyed reading your version of the nursery rhyme much more than the actual one, especially since you gave him a name and a story after he ran, which made it much more dramatic. Hopefully Steve will get back to his family one day! I wonder if he'll ever go back home, since the robbers might be long gone with all his stuff anyway! I guess it's up to you to finish the story. But great job! --Peter
Hi Averey! You have a really cool name! When it comes to your blog, I have an overall suggestion for you. So writing can be viewed as a window of who you are, so your blog website design, layout, and title should serve the same purpose! As nice and clean as the orange and while looks, I am somewhat bored of seeing it on half of my classmate's websites. Maybe choose your favorite color and use a cool title for your website! :)
Hi Averey! Peter was having trouble leaving comments (I think it's something in his browser since it happened with both blogs he tried), so I'm pasting both of his comments for you here — and don't forget to add the label "Comment Wall" to this post; that way people will be able to find it in your label navigation box.
ReplyDeleteIntroduction: Hey Averey! I'm Peter Guzman, and I'm in your blog group this week. I'm so very glad to read that your family is one of the most important things in your life. As I'm sure you already know, being an aunt/uncle is seriously one of the best roles someone can be, because you get to have all the fun and none of the hard stuff like changing diapers and waking up early! I'm extremely jealous that you visited so many places, especially Rome and Spain! Traveling abroad is one thing that I really hope I get to do while in school, but I'm running out of time! Anyways, I'm looking forward to reading your other posts and hearing from you on my blog! --Peter
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Hi Averey! I must say, I definitely enjoyed reading your version of the nursery rhyme much more than the actual one, especially since you gave him a name and a story after he ran, which made it much more dramatic. Hopefully Steve will get back to his family one day! I wonder if he'll ever go back home, since the robbers might be long gone with all his stuff anyway! I guess it's up to you to finish the story. But great job! --Peter
Hi Averey! You have a really cool name! When it comes to your blog, I have an overall suggestion for you. So writing can be viewed as a window of who you are, so your blog website design, layout, and title should serve the same purpose! As nice and clean as the orange and while looks, I am somewhat bored of seeing it on half of my classmate's websites. Maybe choose your favorite color and use a cool title for your website! :)
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